Great game, just a bit too brutal form me, but manageable. Crazy good story. Just one thing. One little thing. Pierogi. I know that America and so one but... So butchered... Pierogi is already prular.
1 - Pieróg
2,3,4 - Pierogi
5,6,7,8,9,10... - Pierogów
I don't know why this angered me so much, rest of the game is very good, just... Butchering my nation's most popular dish annoys me for some reason. Great game otherwise
Okay so I have binge read the entire thing kinda wish there was more than just vore teasing but oh well love the story so far just one Minor thing that irks me, in chapter 8 you are thinking about treats to get and are super worried about chocolate being poisonous to him/her when you already had s'mores with them in an earlier chapter meaning you gave them chocolate and know they can have it. Just a small thing that stuck with me but other than that I love the story and will definitely be reading further updates as soon as they are released.
Holy shit, how did I miss that!? As a fellow reader, the only way I could think that makes sense is that the MC is under a lot of stress and is having a lot of new and bizarre things thrown at him all at once. Having him think about it only after the fact could be an easy fix. Like " oh shoot dogs can't have chocolate! Can Timber have chocolate!? Oh no I'll have to be more careful in the future and maybe ask Timber about it." Or something like that. You get the idea.
Just in case someone is reading this to gauge whether they should play it, there are minor spoiler warnings in this comment!
The story is interesting, Timber is charming (so is our character) and the writing is pretty good.
I only have a few critiques to be honest, but one I haven't seen levied yet is that there's a decent amount of spatial stagnation, it feels like I'm trapped in three places: the cabin, the house and occasionally the walk to her cabin in the woods, of course I understand why this is the case but forests tend to be vast and I definitely think it could be utilised more since it's the cage we (or I suppose Timber) find ourselves in (to be clear, this isn't a comment on the background images.) A good example of something that breaks this feeling is the cave in (I believe) chapter 6 and the tree in (I believe) chapter 8. Otherwise, I enjoyed my time reading this.
only on chapter two now but honestly, I'm loving it. hopes were high when I loaded it up and went down when i saw the first few backgrounds, but I'm pleasantly surprised with the writing. my only wish is that there were more personal options/choices you could make in the story but I'm enjoying it anyways.
I may need more context for this request. I'm not against doing it, I just need to know what to do. Something like, "them/them" pronouns? Changing the art? If you want to DM me on discord, I would be more than happy to chat about it!
I can do that, but I would need some help knowing what to change exactly. When you select those options, what changes? Something like the art shows masculine Timber with she/her pronouns?
My case is the same as the comment below, i was just browsing through games here, trying to find anything that caught my attention (I spent like 20 min scrolling through games).
I must admit this game feels really nice, I don't know exactly what it is but i find myself feeling "comfy"? playing this game, The dialogue is nice, the jokes are funny for me, Timber is really well made like it makes sense the way she is and thinks.
I am still playing (i think i stopped at chapter 8, I am delaying finishing for now because i know i will be agonizing waiting for the next update) the only thing I wished is that Timber had little bit more variety in her sprites. I am really enjoying the experience the game offers, thanks for making this, I hope you stay well through this difficult times.
(I probably spelled a lot of things wrong I don't really write anything in English :p, but I felt the need to comment something for this game which is something I never do normally)
More sprites to show what they are doing to "complement"?(dont know if this is the right word) the situation, an example i can think from the top of my head is: When we hug Timber a pov of us looking up to them would make the feeling of closeness/intimacy a lot more stronger but it doesn't need to be a pov necessarily it could be a sprite of them hugging someone (doesn't need to draw a face because our back would be turned towards us so we could see Timber doing the action and not really focus on us, I think doing like that makes it easier for you because there is no need to focus on the players details like the face and makes it easier for the self inserts) of course I am just sharing an ideia i had. I am really enjoying the game and will continue following it until the end. (Can't wait to see what your next work is going to be, if you are planning to do one of course).
I came with no expectations, and I got here wanting more. Thanks for making this!
It's surely not the high-profile kind of premium-indie game, but certainly has character. Not a whole lot of art but what's there is decent, though backgrounds are mostly rather low res, Timber is nice and fairly consistent. Story is captivating and quite down to earth in a good sense, I like how it's not super predictable, like when it takes a few dialog screens to realize what's really happening. Dialogue is enjoyable, a bit on the repetative side at times, playing it in a few sittings to the current end feels like the "you're weird", "but I can eat you" comes up quite concentrated. Sure it's the elephant in the room, but maybe I'd have liked a bit more variety early on, I still enjoyed it in the end. I also found the joke-bickering quips a bit much at the start, it either grew on me or it got funnier over time, it can be penty hilarious, and turn to be the game's thing. MC and Timber are both enjoyable with some reasonable development as chapters come.
I feel like there's a lot more to explore here, like if we ever find out what they are, what's the hunters' game is. Maybe get more context on what's in characters' head, morality of Timber killing, but also liking it, what makes them so interested in us, just how much of a relationship could unfold with all the differences, etc. So I guess I'm interested in the world :D
Oh yeah, haven't checked a setup other than male MC female Timber but kudos for doubling some effort to make it as much of everyone's thing as you can.
All in all, I would totally crash my car to date IRL Timber.
Thank you for the genuine feedback! It is just me doing everything, so I appreciate the comparison to a high-end game with a full staff. Lots more to come :3
Also, thank you for the best compliment I've ever gotten. Crashing your car to meet Timber is 10/10
I was a bit worried I'd come off too critical, if anything I liked it enough to have my perfectionism surface and think hard on how could it be even better, happy you took it as such. Solo dev alone can be difficult, but to have all the other areas, design and writing, it's impressive. Hope to continue seeing your work!
Thank you so much! And yeah, I was shadowbanned for 8 months. They finally reindexed the story last week. I went from 800 downloads in 7 months to 3k in one week.
Haven’t played it and haven’t used whatever game engine you’re using, but…
Wouldn’t it be possible to create some sort of global variable (static in some languages) that you can set to whatever gender the player has chosen? And then from there, the game would check that global variable whenever it has to pick a pronoun
well i think is too late for my advice, but here we go, could make the dialogue gender neutral so is less work on redoing the entire dialogue but depending on how much you already wrote in texts it could be easier (and less painful to code)to make the global variation for the texts instead rewriting the entire game.
I haven't downloaded it yet because I'm thinking of following its development on Patreon. I'm interested and I liked that we can choose the gender of our MC in this furry game! I wish there were more furry games like this :)
I really like this VN; it would be pretty interesting (and kinda funny) if the MC at some point got tired of tolerating his kind being a snack and was like "Your one of a kind to me, but at this point, either stop turning my kind into a manwich or im out for good this time. You were literally raised by a man, come on bruh, no wonder we got the modern day Silver Hand up in here!I'm just looking for them to bring out the Paladins and start casting holy magic!". 😱😆👍
Uno Reverse Plot Twist: Despite wanting to spank Timber for her naughty acts against Humans, you secretly get wolf meat from a local hunter to survive and you wait for the Silver Hand to teleport over to kick down the cabin door.
Double reverse, Timber eats the wolf meat because Schrodener's wolf; no one knows what Timber actually is, so it isn't technically cannibalism unless they are proven to be a wolf
Story is good but i have on question. Will mc be homicidal? İ dont want to yuck someones yum but its kinda wild that mc accepted timbers homicidal nature pretty quickly
just finished chapter 7 and i'm in awe. I'm loving this story with exception of ch 5 (too heavy for me, i skipped it). But the all the rest of it is so wholesome, i was constant smiling while reading it. I'm totally in favor of the story staying lighter. Either way thank you so very much for this!
Sorry to hear it wasn't up your alley. Hopefully that theme doesn't turn you away from the rest of the story. It will come up a little bit more, but not so heavy. I found out people didn't quite enjoy that
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Good update! Can't wait for more hot sex scenes with my female Timber! Maybe get my Timber pregnant and more hot scenes like public restroom sex and a hot piss scene?
Well i'm people and i want it, you can just make it as a side option, so people don't get 'forced', mhm totally ignore consequences, yea sure, and ignore reality too, what about you add flying turtles?, (no offense to dev, just pointing to those who enjoy crazines
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It's a real good stuff. I liked it.
Thank you for the comment, and thank you for the 5 star review! :3c
Great game, just a bit too brutal form me, but manageable. Crazy good story. Just one thing. One little thing. Pierogi. I know that America and so one but... So butchered... Pierogi is already prular.
1 - Pieróg
2,3,4 - Pierogi
5,6,7,8,9,10... - Pierogów
I don't know why this angered me so much, rest of the game is very good, just... Butchering my nation's most popular dish annoys me for some reason. Great game otherwise
Lol I had no idea. I will fix that for the next update! Thank you for letting me know. I love pierogi so much. I could eat them all day :)
https://www.instagram.com/reel/DF78MvcAJOw/?igsh=MWUxa3kxeDJvOHl5eg==
it explains it quite well here actually, hope I could help
Okay so I have binge read the entire thing kinda wish there was more than just vore teasing but oh well love the story so far just one Minor thing that irks me, in chapter 8 you are thinking about treats to get and are super worried about chocolate being poisonous to him/her when you already had s'mores with them in an earlier chapter meaning you gave them chocolate and know they can have it. Just a small thing that stuck with me but other than that I love the story and will definitely be reading further updates as soon as they are released.
Holy shit, how did I miss that!? As a fellow reader, the only way I could think that makes sense is that the MC is under a lot of stress and is having a lot of new and bizarre things thrown at him all at once. Having him think about it only after the fact could be an easy fix. Like " oh shoot dogs can't have chocolate! Can Timber have chocolate!? Oh no I'll have to be more careful in the future and maybe ask Timber about it." Or something like that. You get the idea.
Just in case someone is reading this to gauge whether they should play it, there are minor spoiler warnings in this comment!
The story is interesting, Timber is charming (so is our character) and the writing is pretty good.
I only have a few critiques to be honest, but one I haven't seen levied yet is that there's a decent amount of spatial stagnation, it feels like I'm trapped in three places: the cabin, the house and occasionally the walk to her cabin in the woods, of course I understand why this is the case but forests tend to be vast and I definitely think it could be utilised more since it's the cage we (or I suppose Timber) find ourselves in (to be clear, this isn't a comment on the background images.) A good example of something that breaks this feeling is the cave in (I believe) chapter 6 and the tree in (I believe) chapter 8. Otherwise, I enjoyed my time reading this.
Thank you for the feedback! There are plans for new places to explore :3
Yay!
only on chapter two now but honestly, I'm loving it. hopes were high when I loaded it up and went down when i saw the first few backgrounds, but I'm pleasantly surprised with the writing. my only wish is that there were more personal options/choices you could make in the story but I'm enjoying it anyways.
I've got some new background pictures and will swap them out soon (You're not the only one lol)
Thank you for the feedback! :3
can't wait for more
:3 more soon
Hey, it's me again after so long.
The game is still as good as ever, and I hope you keep it up.
:'3
Thank you so much. Big things coming soon!
Can this have trans options for both characters?
I may need more context for this request. I'm not against doing it, I just need to know what to do. Something like, "them/them" pronouns? Changing the art? If you want to DM me on discord, I would be more than happy to chat about it!
I mean transwoman and transman options
I can do that, but I would need some help knowing what to change exactly. When you select those options, what changes? Something like the art shows masculine Timber with she/her pronouns?
I mean genital changes, resulting in woman with dick and man with pussy
Let me see what I can do
My case is the same as the comment below, i was just browsing through games here, trying to find anything that caught my attention (I spent like 20 min scrolling through games).
I must admit this game feels really nice, I don't know exactly what it is but i find myself feeling "comfy"? playing this game, The dialogue is nice, the jokes are funny for me, Timber is really well made like it makes sense the way she is and thinks.
I am still playing (i think i stopped at chapter 8, I am delaying finishing for now because i know i will be agonizing waiting for the next update) the only thing I wished is that Timber had little bit more variety in her sprites. I am really enjoying the experience the game offers, thanks for making this, I hope you stay well through this difficult times.
(I probably spelled a lot of things wrong I don't really write anything in English :p, but I felt the need to comment something for this game which is something I never do normally)
Thank youuuuuu!!!!
I love that it gives off the comfy feeling, as it was exactly what I was going for :3
Out of curiosity, what other sprites would you like to see?
More sprites to show what they are doing to "complement"?(dont know if this is the right word) the situation, an example i can think from the top of my head is: When we hug Timber a pov of us looking up to them would make the feeling of closeness/intimacy a lot more stronger but it doesn't need to be a pov necessarily it could be a sprite of them hugging someone (doesn't need to draw a face because our back would be turned towards us so we could see Timber doing the action and not really focus on us, I think doing like that makes it easier for you because there is no need to focus on the players details like the face and makes it easier for the self inserts) of course I am just sharing an ideia i had. I am really enjoying the game and will continue following it until the end. (Can't wait to see what your next work is going to be, if you are planning to do one of course).
Hmmmm. That's a really good idea! Let me see if I can come up with something
I came with no expectations, and I got here wanting more. Thanks for making this!
It's surely not the high-profile kind of premium-indie game, but certainly has character. Not a whole lot of art but what's there is decent, though backgrounds are mostly rather low res, Timber is nice and fairly consistent. Story is captivating and quite down to earth in a good sense, I like how it's not super predictable, like when it takes a few dialog screens to realize what's really happening. Dialogue is enjoyable, a bit on the repetative side at times, playing it in a few sittings to the current end feels like the "you're weird", "but I can eat you" comes up quite concentrated. Sure it's the elephant in the room, but maybe I'd have liked a bit more variety early on, I still enjoyed it in the end. I also found the joke-bickering quips a bit much at the start, it either grew on me or it got funnier over time, it can be penty hilarious, and turn to be the game's thing. MC and Timber are both enjoyable with some reasonable development as chapters come.
I feel like there's a lot more to explore here, like if we ever find out what they are, what's the hunters' game is. Maybe get more context on what's in characters' head, morality of Timber killing, but also liking it, what makes them so interested in us, just how much of a relationship could unfold with all the differences, etc. So I guess I'm interested in the world :D
Oh yeah, haven't checked a setup other than male MC female Timber but kudos for doubling some effort to make it as much of everyone's thing as you can.
All in all, I would totally crash my car to date IRL Timber.
Thank you for the genuine feedback! It is just me doing everything, so I appreciate the comparison to a high-end game with a full staff. Lots more to come :3
Also, thank you for the best compliment I've ever gotten. Crashing your car to meet Timber is 10/10
I was a bit worried I'd come off too critical, if anything I liked it enough to have my perfectionism surface and think hard on how could it be even better, happy you took it as such. Solo dev alone can be difficult, but to have all the other areas, design and writing, it's impressive. Hope to continue seeing your work!
Really great story! Looking forward to reading more.
Btw, shadowbanned? Found this VN as usual, by browsing through list of games on this website.
Thank you so much! And yeah, I was shadowbanned for 8 months. They finally reindexed the story last week. I went from 800 downloads in 7 months to 3k in one week.
This is great!
Thank you! :3
Haven’t played it and haven’t used whatever game engine you’re using, but…
Wouldn’t it be possible to create some sort of global variable (static in some languages) that you can set to whatever gender the player has chosen? And then from there, the game would check that global variable whenever it has to pick a pronoun
That's what I did, I think. I'm still new to coding, so I think I understand what you're saying. I have both set for the love interest and the player
well i think is too late for my advice, but here we go, could make the dialogue gender neutral so is less work on redoing the entire dialogue but depending on how much you already wrote in texts it could be easier (and less painful to code)to make the global variation for the texts instead rewriting the entire game.
I'll look into that. Thanks for the advice! :3c
I haven't downloaded it yet because I'm thinking of following its development on Patreon. I'm interested and I liked that we can choose the gender of our MC in this furry game! I wish there were more furry games like this :)
Thank you so much for the consideration!I appreciate you either way, if you follow or not :)
I love it! I need to see where the story is going ))
Thank youuuu!!
It will continue >:3c
that is really nice game
Thank you so much for taking the time to post :3
I hope you enjoy the next chapter when it gets released
After finishing chapter 9 I am loving this story! I can't wait for more and hope for more chances to be dominant with Timber!
Thank you so much for the feedback! :3c
Excellent work! I quickly became immersed in the fantastic storyline and unique art style. 😆👍
p.s. It'd be really nice if there would be some spanking kinky scence with CGs. XD
Thank you so much! <3
I think i can add something like that!
Can you add sound effects to hot scenes?
Great idea!
Like gulping in a certain scene too haha. Btw I love how kinky Timber is
I really like this VN; it would be pretty interesting (and kinda funny) if the MC at some point got tired of tolerating his kind being a snack and was like "Your one of a kind to me, but at this point, either stop turning my kind into a manwich or im out for good this time. You were literally raised by a man, come on bruh, no wonder we got the modern day Silver Hand up in here!I'm just looking for them to bring out the Paladins and start casting holy magic!". 😱😆👍
Thank you! Plot twist, you start eating people to show Timber you are interested in their hobbies
Uno Reverse Plot Twist: Despite wanting to spank Timber for her naughty acts against Humans, you secretly get wolf meat from a local hunter to survive and you wait for the Silver Hand to teleport over to kick down the cabin door.
:D
Double reverse, Timber eats the wolf meat because Schrodener's wolf; no one knows what Timber actually is, so it isn't technically cannibalism unless they are proven to be a wolf
Story is good but i have on question. Will mc be homicidal? İ dont want to yuck someones yum but its kinda wild that mc accepted timbers homicidal nature pretty quickly
We all make mistakes in the heat of passion.
As of right now, the MC is not planned to become homicidal.
Yuck someone's yum will also be added into my daily vocabulary
never heard that phrase before will be added to mine too(if i could give a comment 5 stars i would)
Fixed
How do I download the Android version? Should I rename it or something?
I rename it to apk, uninstall the old app, and it still pull up an error screen.
You can use AAB installer to convert AAB file to APK file, already tried it and it's working
Sorry, it should have been an APK from the get go. Uploaded the correct file, and I will double check from now on
It was fine, mistake happened sometimes lol
just finished chapter 7 and i'm in awe. I'm loving this story with exception of ch 5 (too heavy for me, i skipped it). But the all the rest of it is so wholesome, i was constant smiling while reading it. I'm totally in favor of the story staying lighter. Either way thank you so very much for this!
Sorry to hear it wasn't up your alley. Hopefully that theme doesn't turn you away from the rest of the story. It will come up a little bit more, but not so heavy. I found out people didn't quite enjoy that
Lots of chapters to come!
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Good update! Can't wait for more hot sex scenes with my female Timber! Maybe get my Timber pregnant and more hot scenes like public restroom sex and a hot piss scene?
Comment section quiet *desert bush flies by Thereawolfy,dead from too much coffee(or smth else), and Zothon, dug his grave, and is waiting*
Yep :)
Question, will pregnancy be added by any chance
That depends on if the people want me to add it!
Well i'm people and i want it, you can just make it as a side option, so people don't get 'forced', mhm totally ignore consequences, yea sure, and ignore reality too, what about you add flying turtles?, (no offense to dev, just pointing to those who enjoy crazines
i can't wait for the next update
HELL YEA!!! CHAPTER SIX
THANK YOU<3
Should be wrapped up and ready to post this Friday! :3
Yay!